Here is a sample essay submitted for correction.

The diagram illustrates the procedures and materials used in making matches.

Overall, a large piece of log was being processed into several stages before a match can be formed until it is packed for packaging.

Initially, logs are peeled through the veneer and they are chopped into layers to pass through the ammonium phosphate tank. The sticks are being dried after saturation.  Then, it passes through the hopper to filter any residues with the use of a blowing machine. Additionally, once it has been filtered, it will take another process for storage that went through the metal duct.  Then after, it is placed in the inserter to attach thin layers of wood in the perforated steel belt. When it has been inserted, tips of the matchsticks are dipped to pass through chemical treatment in different tanks such as paraffin wax, based and tip chemicals. After this process, it will be delivered for drying to percolate any water based chemicals. Lastly, the matches that underwent several process will be packed in the packaging area.

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